I am so sorry about the long wait everypony. This has been one of those summers. (That plus as many of you know, I was working on another story for a contest.) But chapter 14 has been edited, is back up and ready for you to read again! Not 'too' much changed, took out the clop scene and added a feeding scene instead, but besides that and a few minor little fixes and a lot shorter.

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Added a few paragraphs to explain things, such as the prologue's antagonists, and how the city functions a little bit. A little backstory as well for the main character, Alex.
Changed and rewrote some paragraphs.

Hopefully it's more cohesive then before!